Improve internationalisation for email templates, scripts, commands and error messages

re2o/login.py

@@ -80,21 +80,21 @@ def hash_password_salt(hashed_password):
         try:
             digest = b64decode(hashed_password[6:])
         except TypeError as error:
-            raise ValueError("b64 error for `hashed_password` : %s" % error)
+            raise ValueError("b64 error for `hashed_password`: %s." % error)
         if len(digest) < 20:
-            raise ValueError("`hashed_password` too short")
+            raise ValueError("`hashed_password` too short.")
         return digest[20:]
     elif hashed_password.upper().startswith("{SMD5}"):
         try:
             digest = b64decode(hashed_password[7:])
         except TypeError as error:
-            raise ValueError("b64 error for `hashed_password` : %s" % error)
+            raise ValueError("b64 error for `hashed_password`: %s." % error)
         if len(digest) < 16:
-            raise ValueError("`hashed_password` too short")
+            raise ValueError("`hashed_password` too short.")
         return digest[16:]
     else:
         raise ValueError(
-            "`hashed_password` should start with '{SSHA}' or '{CRYPT}' or '{SMD5}'"
+            "`hashed_password` should start with '{SSHA}' or '{CRYPT}' or '{SMD5}'."
         )
 
 

re2o/management/commands/gen_contrib.py

@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ class Command(BaseCommand):
             for item in os.popen("git shortlog -s -n").read().split("\n")
             if "\t" in item
         ]
-        self.stdout.write(self.style.SUCCESS("Exportation Successful"))
+        self.stdout.write(self.style.SUCCESS("Exportation successful!"))
         with open("re2o/contributors.py", "w") as contrib_file:
             content = self._contrib_file_generator(contributors)
             contrib_file.write(content)

re2o/mixins.py

@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ class FormRevMixin(object):
             )
         elif self.changed_data:
             reversion.set_comment(
-                "Field(s) altered : %s"
+                "Field(s) edited: %s"
                 % ", ".join(field for field in self.changed_data)
             )
         return super(FormRevMixin, self).save(*args, **kwargs)

re2o/script_utils.py

@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ def get_user(pseudo):
         raise CommandError("Invalid user.")
     if len(user) > 1:
         raise CommandError(
-            "Several users match this username. This SHOULD" " NOT happen."
+            "Several users match this username. This SHOULD NOT happen."
         )
     return user[0]
 
@@ -95,5 +95,5 @@ def form_cli(Form, user, action, *args, **kwargs):
         reversion.set_comment(action)
 
     sys.stdout.write(
-        "%s : done. The edit may take several minutes to" " apply.\n" % action
+        "%s: done. The edit may take several minutes to apply.\n" % action
     )

re2o/templatetags/acl.py

@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ def get_model(model_name):
             app_label, name = splitted
         except ValueError:
             raise template.TemplateSyntaxError(
-                "%r is an inconsistent model name" % model_name
+                "%r is an inconsistent model name." % model_name
             )
     else:
         app_label, name = None, splitted[0]
@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ def get_model(model_name):
             content_type = ContentType.objects.get(model=name.lower())
     except ContentType.DoesNotExist:
         raise template.TemplateSyntaxError(
-            "%r is not a valid model for an acl tag" % model_name
+            "%r is not a valid model for an acl tag." % model_name
         )
     except ContentType.MultipleObjectsReturned:
         raise template.TemplateSyntaxError(
@@ -178,7 +178,7 @@ def get_callback(tag_name, obj=None):
             True,
         )
 
-    raise template.TemplateSyntaxError("%r tag is not a valid can_xxx tag" % tag_name)
+    raise template.TemplateSyntaxError("%r tag is not a valid can_xxx tag." % tag_name)
 
 
 def acl_fct(callback, reverse):
@@ -264,7 +264,7 @@ def acl_change_filter(parser, token):
         args = tag_content[3:]
     except ValueError:
         raise template.TemplateSyntaxError(
-            "%r tag require at least 2 argument: the model and the field"
+            "%r tag require at least 2 argument: the model and the field."
             % token.contents.split()[0]
         )
 
@@ -306,7 +306,7 @@ def acl_model_filter(parser, token):
         args = tag_content[2:]
     except ValueError:
         raise template.TemplateSyntaxError(
-            "%r tag require at least 1 argument: the model" % token.contents.split()[0]
+            "%r tag require at least 1 argument: the model." % token.contents.split()[0]
         )
 
     model = get_model(model_name)
@@ -345,7 +345,7 @@ def acl_instance_filter(parser, token):
         args = tag_content[2:]
     except ValueError:
         raise template.TemplateSyntaxError(
-            "%r tag require at least 1 argument: the instance"
+            "%r tag require at least 1 argument: the instance."
             % token.contents.split()[0]
         )
 

tickets/templates/tickets/publication_mail_en

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 {% if ticket.user %} {{ ticket.user.get_full_name }} opened a ticket.
-Profil: {{site_url}}{% url 'users:profil' ticket.user.id%}
+Profile: {{site_url}}{% url 'users:profil' ticket.user.id%}
 Answer to the address: {{ticket.user.get_mail}}.
 
 {% else %}  

tickets/templates/tickets/publication_mail_fr

@@ -1,12 +1,12 @@
-{% if ticket.user %} {{ ticket.user.get_full_name }} à ouvert un ticket.
+{% if ticket.user %} {{ ticket.user.get_full_name }} a ouvert un ticket.
-Profile: {{site_url}}{% url 'users:profil' ticket.user.id%}
+Profil : {{site_url}}{% url 'users:profil' ticket.user.id%}
-Répondre à l'adresse: {{ticket.user.get_mail}}.
+Répondre à l'adresse : {{ticket.user.get_mail}}.
 
 {% else %} 
-Un utilisateur anonyme (non connecté) à ouvert un ticket.
+Un utilisateur anonyme (non connecté) a ouvert un ticket.
-Répondre à l'adresse: {{ticket.email}}.
+Répondre à l'adresse : {{ticket.email}}.
 {% endif %}
 
-Titre: {{ticket.title}}
+Titre : {{ticket.title}}
 
-Description: {{ticket.description}}
+Description : {{ticket.description}}

users/management/commands/anonymize.py → users/management/commands/anonymise.py

@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ from random import randint
 
 
 class Command(BaseCommand):
-    help = "Anonymize the data in the database in order to use them on critical servers (dev, personnal...). Every information will be overwritten using non-personnal informations. This script must follow any modification of the database.\nOptionnal argument: {id|id|id|...} to exclude users from anonymisation"
+    help = "Anonymise the data in the database in order to use them on critical servers (dev, personal...). Every information will be overwritten using non-personal information. This script must follow any modification of the database.\nOptional argument: {id|id|id|...} to exclude users from anonymisation."
 
     def add_arguments(self, parser):
         parser.add_argument("user_id", nargs="+", type=int, help="User ID")
@@ -22,14 +22,14 @@ class Command(BaseCommand):
         users_ids = kwargs["user_id"]
         for user_id in users_ids:
             self.stdout.write(
-                "User: {} will not be anonymised".format(
+                "User: {} will not be anonymised.".format(
                     User.objects.filter(id=user_id).get().name
                 )
             )
 
         self.stdout.write(
             self.style.WARNING(
-                "\nDISCLAIMER\nThis function will make your database unusable for production. Are you sure you want to run this ?(doit): "
+                "\nDISCLAIMER\nThis function will make your database unusable for production. Are you sure you want to run this? (doit): "
             )
         )
         if input() == "doit":
@@ -43,52 +43,52 @@ class Command(BaseCommand):
             d = Domain.objects.all()
             m = Machine.objects.filter(~Q(user_id__in=users_ids))
 
-            self.stdout.write("Supression de l'école...")
+            self.stdout.write("Deletion of the school...")
             # Create a fake School to put everyone in it.
-            ecole = School(name="Ecole des Ninja")
+            ecole = School(name="Ninja School")
             ecole.save()
             u.update(school=ecole)
-            self.stdout.write(self.style.SUCCESS("done ..."))
+            self.stdout.write(self.style.SUCCESS("Done..."))
 
-            self.stdout.write("Supression des chambres...")
+            self.stdout.write("Deletion of rooms...")
             a.update(room=None)
             c.update(room=None)
-            self.stdout.write(self.style.SUCCESS("done ..."))
+            self.stdout.write(self.style.SUCCESS("Done..."))
 
-            self.stdout.write("Supression des mails...")
+            self.stdout.write("Deletion of email addresses...")
             u.update(
                 email="example@example.org",
                 local_email_redirect=False,
                 local_email_enabled=False,
             )
-            self.stdout.write(self.style.SUCCESS("done ..."))
+            self.stdout.write(self.style.SUCCESS("Done..."))
 
             self.stdout.write(
-                "Supression des noms, prenoms, pseudo, telephone, commentaire..."
+                "Deletion of first names, surnames, usernames, telephone numbers, comments..."
             )
-            a.update(name=Concat(Value("name of "), "id"))
+            a.update(name=Concat(Value("First name of "), "id"))
-            self.stdout.write(self.style.SUCCESS("done name"))
+            self.stdout.write(self.style.SUCCESS("Done for first names..."))
 
-            a.update(surname=Concat(Value("surname of "), "id"))
+            a.update(surname=Concat(Value("Surname of "), "id"))
-            self.stdout.write(self.style.SUCCESS("done surname"))
+            self.stdout.write(self.style.SUCCESS("Done for surnames..."))
 
             u.update(pseudo=F("id"))
-            self.stdout.write(self.style.SUCCESS("done pseudo"))
+            self.stdout.write(self.style.SUCCESS("Done for usernames..."))
 
-            a.update(telephone=Concat(Value("phone of "), "id"))
+            a.update(telephone=Concat(Value("Telephone number of "), "id"))
-            self.stdout.write(self.style.SUCCESS("done phone"))
+            self.stdout.write(self.style.SUCCESS("Done for telephone numbers..."))
 
-            a.update(comment=Concat(Value("commentaire of "), "id"))
+            a.update(comment=Concat(Value("Comment of "), "id"))
-            self.stdout.write(self.style.SUCCESS("done ..."))
+            self.stdout.write(self.style.SUCCESS("Done for comments..."))
 
-            self.stdout.write("Renommage des machines...")
+            self.stdout.write("Renaming of machines...")
             m.update(
                 name=Concat(Value("Machine "), F("id"), Value(" of "), F("user_id"))
             )
-            d.update(name=Concat(Value("Domaine id "), F("id")))
+            d.update(name=Concat(Value("Domain id "), F("id")))
-            self.stdout.write(self.style.SUCCESS("done ..."))
+            self.stdout.write(self.style.SUCCESS("Done..."))
 
-            self.stdout.write("Unification du mot de passe...")
+            self.stdout.write("Unification of the password...")
             # Define the password
             chars = string.ascii_letters + string.digits + "!@#$%^&*()"
             taille = 20
@@ -99,19 +99,19 @@ class Command(BaseCommand):
 
             self.stdout.write(
                 self.style.HTTP_NOT_MODIFIED(
-                    "The password will be: {}".format(password)
+                    "The password will be: {}.".format(password)
                 )
             )
 
             u.update(pwd_ntlm=hashNT(password))
             u.update(password=makeSecret(password))
-            self.stdout.write(self.style.SUCCESS("done..."))
+            self.stdout.write(self.style.SUCCESS("Done..."))
 
-            self.stdout.write("Suppression de l'historique (This may take some time)")
+            self.stdout.write("Deletion of the history (this may take some time)...")
             Revision.objects.all().delete()
-            self.stdout.write(self.style.SUCCESS("done..."))
+            self.stdout.write(self.style.SUCCESS("Done..."))
 
-            self.stdout.write("Data anonymized!")
+            self.stdout.write("Data anonymised!")
 
         else:
-            self.stdout.write("Anonymisation aborted")
+            self.stdout.write("Anonymisation aborted!")

users/management/commands/archive.py

@@ -45,14 +45,14 @@ class Command(BaseCommand):
             "--full",
             "-f",
             action="store_true",
-            help="Full archive users, i.e. delete their email address, machines and remove them from the LDAP.",
+            help="Fully archive users, i.e. delete their email address, machines and remove them from the LDAP.",
         )
         parser.add_argument(
             "--date",
             "-d",
             default=datetime.date.today().strftime("%d/%m/%Y"),
             type=valid_date,
-            help="Users which membership ends sooner than this date will be archived.",
+            help="Users whose membership ends sooner than this date will be archived.",
         )
         parser.add_argument(
             "--show",
@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@ class Command(BaseCommand):
         parser.add_argument(
             "-y",
             action="store_true",
-            help="Do not ask for confirmation befor full archiving.",
+            help="Do not ask for confirmation before fully archiving.",
         )
 
     def handle(self, *args, **kwargs):
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ class Command(BaseCommand):
         if full_archive and not force:
             self.stdout.write(
                 self.style.WARNING(
-                    "Please confirm full archiving (it is a critical operation !) [Y/n]"
+                    "Please confirm fully archiving (it is a critical operation!) [Y/n]"
                 )
             )
             if input() != "Y":
@@ -95,13 +95,13 @@ class Command(BaseCommand):
                 return
         if full_archive:
             self.stdout.write(
-                "Full archiving users with a membership ending prior to %s"
+                "Fully archiving users with a membership ending prior to %s."
                 % date.strftime("%d/%m/%Y")
             )
             User.mass_full_archive(to_archive_list)
         else:
             self.stdout.write(
-                "Archiving users with a membership ending prior to %s"
+                "Archiving users with a membership ending prior to %s."
                 % date.strftime("%d/%m/%Y")
             )
             to_archive_list = to_archive_list.exclude(state=User.STATE_ARCHIVE)

users/management/commands/chgpass.py

@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ from re2o.script_utils import get_user, get_system_user, form_cli
 
 
 class Command(BaseCommand):
-    help = "Changer le mot de passe d'un utilisateur"
+    help = "Change the password of a user."
 
     def add_arguments(self, parser):
         parser.add_argument("target_username", nargs="?")
@@ -44,8 +44,8 @@ class Command(BaseCommand):
         if not ok:
             raise CommandError(msg)
 
-        self.stdout.write("Changement du mot de passe de %s" % target_user.pseudo)
+        self.stdout.write("Password change of %s" % target_user.pseudo)
 
         form_cli(
-            PassForm, current_user, "Changement du mot de passe", instance=target_user
+            PassForm, current_user, "Password change", instance=target_user
         )

users/management/commands/chsh.py

@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ from re2o.script_utils import get_user, get_system_user
 
 
 class Command(BaseCommand):
-    help = "Change the default shell of a user"
+    help = "Change the default shell of a user."
 
     def add_arguments(self, parser):
         parser.add_argument("target_username", nargs="?")
@@ -52,37 +52,36 @@ class Command(BaseCommand):
 
         shells = ListShell.objects.all()
 
-        current_shell = "inconnu"
+        current_shell = "unknown"
         if target_user.shell:
             current_shell = target_user.shell.get_pretty_name()
         self.stdout.write(
-            "Choisissez un shell pour l'utilisateur %s (le shell actuel est "
+            "Choose a shell for the user %s (the current shell is"
-            "%s) :" % (target_user.pseudo, current_shell)
+            " %s):" % (target_user.pseudo, current_shell)
         )
         for shell in shells:
             self.stdout.write(
                 "%d - %s (%s)" % (shell.id, shell.get_pretty_name(), shell.shell)
             )
-        shell_id = input("Entrez un nombre : ")
+        shell_id = input("Enter a number: ")
 
         try:
             shell_id = int(shell_id)
         except:
-            raise CommandError("Choix invalide")
+            raise CommandError("Invalid choice.")
 
         shell = ListShell.objects.filter(id=shell_id)
         if not shell:
-            raise CommandError("Choix invalide")
+            raise CommandError("Invalid choice.")
 
         target_user.shell = shell.first()
         with transaction.atomic(), reversion.create_revision():
             target_user.save()
             reversion.set_user(current_user)
-            reversion.set_comment("Shell modifié")
+            reversion.set_comment("Shell changed.")
 
         self.stdout.write(
             self.style.SUCCESS(
-                "Shell modifié. La modification peut prendre quelques minutes "
+                "Shell changed. The change may take a few minutes to apply."
-                "pour s'appliquer."
             )
         )

users/management/commands/clean_notyetactive.py

@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ from django.utils import timezone
 
 
 class Command(BaseCommand):
-    help = "Delete non members users (not yet active)"
+    help = "Delete non members users (not yet active)."
 
     def handle(self, *args, **options):
         """First deleting invalid invoices, and then deleting the users"""
@@ -38,6 +38,6 @@ class Command(BaseCommand):
             .exclude(facture__valid=True)
             .distinct()
         )
-        print("Deleting " + str(users_to_delete.count()) + " users")
+        print("Deleting " + str(users_to_delete.count()) + " users.")
         Facture.objects.filter(user__in=users_to_delete).delete()
         users_to_delete.delete()

users/management/commands/derniere_connexion.py

@@ -57,8 +57,8 @@ DATE_FORMATS = [
 
 class Command(BaseCommand):
     help = (
-        "Update the time of the latest connection for users by matching "
+        "Update the time of the latest connection for users by matching"
-        "stdin against a set of regular expressions"
+        " stdin against a set of regular expressions."
     )
 
     def handle(self, *args, **options):

users/management/commands/ldap_rebuild.py

@@ -96,8 +96,8 @@ def sync_ldap():
 
 class Command(BaseCommand):
     help = (
-        "Destroy the current LDAP data and rebuild it from the DB data. "
+        "Destroy the current LDAP data and rebuild it from the DB data."
-        "Use with caution."
+        " Use with caution."
     )
 
     def handle(self, *args, **options):
@@ -109,6 +109,6 @@ class Command(BaseCommand):
         server = settings.DATABASES["ldap"]["NAME"]
 
         flush_ldap(binddn, bindpass, server, usersdn, groupsdn)
-        self.stdout.write("LDAP emptied")
+        self.stdout.write("LDAP emptied.")
         sync_ldap()
-        self.stdout.write("LDAP rebuilt")
+        self.stdout.write("LDAP rebuilt.")

users/management/commands/ldap_sync.py

@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ from users.models import User
 
 
 class Command(BaseCommand):
-    help = "Synchronise le ldap à partir du sql. A utiliser dans un cron"
+    help = "Synchronise the LDAP from SQL. To be used in a cron."
 
     def add_arguments(self, parser):
 
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ class Command(BaseCommand):
             action="store_true",
             dest="full",
             default=False,
-            help="Régénération complète du ldap (y compris des machines)",
+            help="Complete regeneration of the LDAP (including machines).",
         )
 
     def handle(self, *args, **options):

users/templates/users/email_auto_newmachine

@@ -1,27 +1,31 @@
-<p>Bonjour {{nom}} </p>
+<p>Bonjour {{ nom }},</p>
 
 <p>Une nouvelle machine a automatiquement été inscrite sur votre compte.</p>
 
-<p>Si vous êtes à l'origine de la connexion de cet appareil en filaire ou wifi, ne tenez pas compte de cette notification</p>
+<p>Si vous êtes à l'origine de la connexion de cet appareil en filaire ou Wi-Fi, ne tenez pas compte de ce mail.</p>
 
-<p>La nouvelle machine possède l'adresse mac {{ mac_address }}, et s'est vu assigner le nom suivant : {{ interface_name }}</p>
+<p>La nouvelle machine possède l'adresse MAC {{ mac_address }}, et s'est vu assigner le nom suivant : {{ interface_name }}.</p>
 
-<p>Vous pouvez à tout moment modifier ces informations sur votre compte en ligne</p>
+<p>Vous pouvez à tout moment modifier ces informations sur votre compte en ligne.</p>
 
-<p>Si vous n'êtes pas à l'origine de cette connexion, merci de le signaler rapidement à {{asso_email}}</p>
+<p>Si vous n'êtes pas à l'origine de cette connexion, veuillez le signaler rapidement à {{ asso_email }}.</p>
 
-<p>À bientôt,<br>
+<p>Respectueusement,<br>
-L'équipe de {{asso_name}}.</p>
+L'équipe de {{ asso_name }}.</p>
 
 <p>---</p>
 
-<p>A new device has been automatically added on your account.</p>
+<p>Hello {{ nom }},</p>
 
-<p>If you connected a new device recently, please don't take this mail into account<p>
+<p>A new machine has been automatically added on your account.</p>
 
-<p>The new device has this mac address : {{ mac_address }}, and this name : {{ interface_name }}</p>
+<p>If you are the one who connected this machine with wire of Wi-Fi, don't take this mail into account.<p>
 
-<p>Please contact us if you didn't connect a new device with this mail address {{asso_email}}.</p>
+<p>The new machine has this MAC address: {{ mac_address }}, and has been assigned this name: {{ interface_name }}</p>
+
+<p>At any time, you can edit this information on your online account.</p>
+
+<p>If you didn't connect this machine, please report it quickly to {{ asso_email }}.</p>
 
 <p>Regards,<br>
-The {{asso_name}} team.</p>
+The {{ asso_name }} team.</p>

users/templates/users/email_ban_notif

@@ -1,8 +1,19 @@
-Bonjour {{name}},
+<p>Bonjour {{ name }},</p>
 
-Vous avez été banni par un administrateur de {{ asso_name }} en raison de {{raison}}. Vous n'avez plus accès au réseau jusqu'au {{date_end}}.
+<p>Vous avez été banni par un administrateur de {{ asso_name }} pour la raison suivante : {{ raison }}. Vous n'avez plus accès au réseau jusqu'au {{ date_end }}.</p>
 
-Pour de plus amples informations, rendez-vous à l'accueil de {{ asso_name }}.
+<p>Pour de plus amples renseignements, contactez le comité de direction de {{ asso_name }}.</p>
 
-Cordialement,
+<p>Respectueusement,<br>
-	L'équipe de {{ asso_name }}. 
+L'équipe de {{ asso_name }}.</p>
+
+<p>---</p>
+
+<p>Hello {{ name }},</p>
+
+<p>You have been banned by a administrator of {{ asso_name }} for the following reason: {{ raison }}. You don't have access to the network anymore until {{ date_end }}.</p>
+
+<p>For more information, contact the steering committee of {{ asso_name }}.</p>
+
+<p>Regards,<br>
+The {{ asso_name }} team.</p>

users/templates/users/email_passwd_request

@@ -1,33 +1,33 @@
 Bonjour {{ name }},
 
-Vous trouverez ci-dessous une url permetant d'initialiser ou de reinitialiser votre
+Vous trouverez ci-dessous une URL permettant d'initialiser ou de réinitialiser votre
-compte {{ site_name }}. Celui-ci vous permet de gérer l'ensemble de vos équipements
+mot de passe pour votre compte {{ site_name }}. Celui-ci vous permet de gérer l'ensemble
-connectés, votre compte, vos factures, et tous les services proposés sur le réseau.
+de vos équipements, votre compte, vos factures, et tous les services proposés sur le réseau.
 
     {{ url }}
 
 Contactez les administrateurs si vous n'êtes pas à l'origine de cette requête.
 
-Ce lien expirera dans {{ expire_in }}.
+Ce lien expirera dans {{ expire_in }} heures.
 
-Cordialement,
+Respectueusement,
 
 L'équipe de {{ asso }} (contact : {{ asso_mail }}).
 
-----------------------
+---
 
-Hi {{ name }},
+Hello {{ name }},
 
-You will find a link allowing you to change the password of your account on {{ site_name }}.
+You will find below an URL allowing you to set or reset your the password of your account
-On this website you will then be able to manage your devices on the {{ asso }}.
+on {{ site_name }}. It enables you to manage your devices, your account, your invoices, and all
+the services offered on the network.
 
     {{ url }}
 
-This link will expire in {{ expire_in }}.
+Contact the administrators if you didn't request this.
 
-Send an email at {{ asso_mail }} if you didn't request this or if you have
+This link will expire in {{ expire_in }} hours.
-any other question.
 
-Thanks
+Regards,
 
-The team of {{ asso }} (contact : {{ asso_mail }}).
+The {{ asso }} team (contact: {{ asso_mail }}).

users/templates/users/email_welcome

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 
 <p>Il vous suffit maintenant de payer l'adhésion pour devenir adhérent de {{asso_name}} et bénéficier des services. Pour avoir accès à Internet, il vous faudra payer la connexion.</p>
 
-<p>Pour ce faire, rien de plus simple. Une fois que vous aurez défini votre mot de passe, il vous suffira d'accéder à votre profil et de cliquer sur 'Payer la connexion'</p>
+<p>Pour ce faire, rien de plus simple. Une fois que vous aurez défini votre mot de passe, il vous suffira d'accéder à votre profil et de cliquer sur « Payer une connexion »</p>
 
 <p>Votre pseudo est : {{pseudo}}</p>
 
@@ -10,21 +10,22 @@
 
 <p>Pour nous faire part de toute remarque, suggestion ou problème vous pouvez nous envoyer un mail à {{asso_email}}.</p>
 
-<p>À bientôt,<br>
+<p>Respectueusement,<br>
 L'équipe de {{asso_name}}.</p>
 
 <p>---</p>
 
-<p>You just need to pay membership to become a full member of {{asso_name}} and benefit from the services. To have Internet access, you will need to pay the connexion. </p>
+<p>Hello {{nom}}!</p>
 
-<p>Nothing could be simpler. Once your password is defined, you just need to visit your profile and click on 'Pay for a connexion'.</p>
+<p>You just need to pay the membership fee to become a contributing member of {{asso_name}} and benefit from the services. To get Internet access, you will need to pay the connection.</p>
 
-<p>Your username is : {{pseudo}}<p>
+<p>Nothing could be simpler. Once your password is defined, you just need to access your profile and click on "Pay for a connection".</p>
+
+<p>Your username is: {{pseudo}}<p>
 
 {{welcome_mail_en|safe}}
 
-<p>For any information, suggestion or problem, you can contact us via email at<br>
+<p>To express any comment, suggestion or problem, you can send us an email to {{asso_email}}.</p>
-{{asso_email}}.</p>
 
 <p>Regards,<br>
 The {{asso_name}} team.</p>